For those of you who have been around for awhile, you know that I post one time a day and only one time. When I post I post positive. No trauma drama from this mama...at least not here in FB Land! (Or blog land either for that matter since this is cross-posting!)
Well, after bordering on negative yesterday, today was another one of those days where I thought to myself, "Maybe today's the day...maybe there are no more things to love. Maybe today's the day I need to hang it up and just love chocolate chip cookies and get out of the feel good game." Chocolate chip cookies are my fall back for when I really do run out of things to love...if such a day should ever arrive.
Not so! Last Tuesday, I shared here about a wonderful Poetry Slam performance I had found on youtube. I am sad to say that I do not remember the bunny trail of links it took me to find it or who the original "sharer" was, but Touchscreen was very well received by my 7th and 8th graders. Today I was amazed and surprised by a poem that one of my 8th grade students wrote and shared on Facebook. His timing was impeccable and I told him so...I also told him it made me cry. He said, "Oh, cool! I mean...umm..." I reassured him that they were good, happy, "teacher" tears and asked for his permission to share his work here. I am doubly impressed that when he posted it, he remembered to include the "inspired by" line at the bottom.
Thanks for making my day, Clayton! Today I love inspiration!
Tagging used to be for recess.
Tweeting used to be for birds.
We used to look out windows.
Has technology changed our words?
We used to develop pictures
In the photoshop.
And the Amazon was a river,
A favorite vacation stop.
And instead of using Facebook,
Shouldn't a book be facing me?
Our technology really has
Changed the world we see.
Written by Clayton A.
Inspired by Marshall Davis Jones
2nd place poetry slam
Look him up on YouTube!
I've been challenged by the many creative folks who participated in the Slice of Life Story Challenge that I just finished in March to actually acknowledge and do something about National Poetry Month this year. I'm ashamed of how many times I've let it slip by unnoticed over the years and am committed (or maybe just should be committed!) to do something poetic with my students each day this month. Wish me luck! At the same time that I am trying to be poetic, I'll also be doing a weekly slice at The Slice of Life Weekly Challenge each Tuesday. And of course...there's always something to love! Enjoy!
Today I love "Touchscreen" by Marshall Davis/Soulful Jones. I happened across this gem of performance poetry as I was looking for something different to share with my students on this second day of National Poetry Month. We worked hard writing Six Room Poems yesterday (there's your link, Linda Fifer!), and I wanted them to be able to just listen and enjoy today. My 7th and 8th graders loved, loved, loved it! I played it TWICE for them...and for me! Because the youtube version (link below) is a teeny bit PG rated, I did not show it to my 6th graders and opted instead to read a few poems aloud from A Child's Anthology of Poetry. Oh, that every child (and adult) could have their own copy of this book to highlight, underline, and notate up a storm in! They enjoyed Roger the Dog by Ted Hughes, and Homework! Oh Homework! by Jack Prelutsky, along with a few others. My heart thrilled to see that as I turned the book sideways, they recognized The Mending Wall by Robert Frost just by its shape alone! A guest speaker recently took them all the way through this classic poem and they obviously remembered what they learned!
For my students who just competed in our Junior High Speech Meet, watching Mr. Jones perform "Touchscreen" was a chance to view an art form of the highest quality. I loved it because so many of us, teacher and student alike, connected with it...and isn't that what poetry is all about...connections? I asked the students to jot down words and phrases that caught their attention or spoke to them. I was amazed at what they picked out...very much the same lines that got to me!
"from the garden of Eden
to the branches of Macintosh
apple picking has always come at a great cost"
and...
"it was difficult to connect when friends formed cliques
now it’s even more difficult to connect
now that clicks form friends"
When I got home tonight I went searching for the words to the whole poem and googled them up at The Henry Brothers' Jim Jam Slam. You'll be able to access the words and view the performance at this link. Please enjoy this little slice of my day in Middle School as we read, write, rhythm and rhyme our way through National Poetry Month.
